"The voices of several announcers from different areas blurred together as we walked toward the international arena. The smells of grilling meats, soft pretzels, and pungent fruits floated on the gentle breeze. We walked around the vivid yellow-and-white-striped tents and worked our way to the west-side bleachers, anticipating and hoping to avoid the intensity of the later sun." This passage describes the setting of the 1996 American Grand Prix competition in great detail. It enhances the reading experience by painting a picture for the reader. The author gives us concrete examples of what the show grounds were like. By using details, the reader can feel like they're actually there instead of just reading about it.
If Margie was where she was in the 90s today (she's 54 now) she would probably be fine. In fact, she would probably be better. In my opinion, in the 80s and 90s the upper levels of the horse world where more strict and tough on the riders. While some trainers are still like that today, many of them are more patient and understanding with the riders. Also, the holes in the Olympic committee have been cleared up so there is less confusion. Margie is a tough and diligent person. I feel that she would excel and make the best of anywhere she was.
Margie and Hidden Creek's Laurel at the 1996 American Grand Prix competition where she became the first five-time AGA (American Grand Prix) Rider of the Year.
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